Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Area of Improvement

Post areas my paper can be improved

10 comments:

  1. Your blog was overall very good; although in your influences you could've given more reason for them being influential.

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  2. This blog was very good and detailed, although i believe it could use a little color to make it more exciting. There could also be a few more fun facts added. Overall great blog though.

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  3. Great blog but I think you needed more content.

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  4. I think there should be more colors its kind of dull but a great blog.

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  5. It might need a bit more color and reasoning.

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  6. It was good, but I think you could make it a little more interesting with some more color and details.

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  7. Put a little color in your LIFE! No just kidding...put it in your blog.

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  8. Awsome blog. But color was too dark. Come on! It's John Adams!

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  9. I agree with Bailey put more color in your LIFE!!! Just kidding... just in your blog.

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